Tuesday, 15 February 2011

ugh again?

Holy fuck, there is so much sodden paper and so much muck
Can't you see that we two are stuck,
we turned left then right,
we jumped then had to duck
we ran in a circle, but just for good luck.
We three kings are kind of in a rut,
we used to have swagger my god could we strut,
now we just sit here and smoke to the butt.
we might as well start pissing on the carpet.

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3 comments:

  1. Jennifer15 February 2011 at 18:19

    demonstration of reader response in action .... eat your BARTHES out AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH creeeiiinge

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  2. Jennifer15 February 2011 at 18:19

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  3. Jennifer15 February 2011 at 18:28

    lol now that looks suspicious it just said 'wtf my comment has been deleted' but i think i did that it was pretty suspect anyway - the critic's eternal shame etc. there's prob a book on that. im going to write you a poem now in response! omg exciting

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